" Metaphors don't cloud the truth"

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  1. katsy93 said:

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    I promised myself one thing
    Don't do it again
    I told myself quietly
    You know how it ends
    It goes round and round once or twice
    And we watch as time slows
    I think of where it went wrong
    But I already know
    I love to take the first step
    You love the way I get excited
    And that day I brought you home with me
    For once it won't be unrequited
    But then we start to talk
    About the things stuck in our head
    And that familiar song starts to play
    I'm thinking here we go again

    I think why does,
    This have to be the one i love
    When everything falls into place
    Why can't you be the one, be the one that I turn and I face
    Every night I wish for things stuck inside dreams,
    I pull and I push, to show you what I mean
    What I mean

    I look at all in front of me
    Can I take this much more?
    Living in uncertainty
    While I'm sinking to the floor
    I get that it's not easy
    When the words, they just escape you
    But I hope that that's the reason and there's not something else that's holding you
    After all I've said and done
    It's more than I deserve
    And I get that there's no ground to stand on
    But still I've got the nerve
    To say I shouldn't have to deal with this
    Nobody should
    Because every day's a mystery
    Hoping you'll be standing next to me
    That this won't just end as history
    I wish that I could
    But can't, so,

    I think why does,
    This have to be the one i love
    When everything falls into place
    Why can't you be the one, be the one that I turn and I face
    Every night I wish for things stuck inside dreams,
    I pull and I push, to show you what I mean
    What I mean

    I've given us something to look forward to
    And all I've ever wanted was to give that thing to you
    To say the miles are still in front of us
    and you've got the key
    But I've got the map, I know you'll give them to me
    It's late where you are and the nights they're still cold
    Wondering if you're dreaming of the things that I've told
    A plane that's gonna take us, to far away cities
    And the only thing I ask is that you'll be there with me
     
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    I like your lyrics, especially the last line. I don't understand why it's called "Metaphors Don't Cloud the Truth" though. Why not call it "The One I Love" or "Stuck Inside Dreams" since those are reoccurring lyrics that make good titles? Just a suggestion. I think your song title will be more memorable that way.