Deafening

(Shhhhh...)
...It seems like every sound is so subdued,
Since you went away,
Wishing just for silence,
How heavy silence weigh.

(Shhhhh...)
...It was all the things I said,
You don't wanna hear them any more,
It was all the things I did,
That made you push me out he door.


(Shhhhh...)
...It's now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day, I add more bricks,
(Shhhhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

(Shhhhh...)
...It makes my muscle atrophy,
It can't grow anymore,
Confined to this cell I built,
Happiness no more.

(Shhhhh...)
...It's all just so deafening,
The silence is all I hear,
Every word that you don't speak,
The silence is crystal clear

(Shhhhh......it)

[Chorus]
(Shhhhh...)
...It's now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day, I add more bricks,
(Shhhhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

I don't want to hear your silence anymore

(Shhhhh.....)
...It is now only silence
(Shhhhh...)
...It's the wall that blocks it out,
(Shhhhh...)
...It's another day and I add more bricks,
(Shhhhh...)
...It keeps out silence that you shout.

I don't want to hear your silence any more

(Shhhhh......it)

+Again, awesome title.

I actually laughed aloud when I saw this:

Originally Posted by farnum

(Shhhhh......it)

Your lyrics are creative
but it kinda doesn't make sense.

'It keeps out silence that you shout.'?

By the way: Second Verse, Last line. A missing 't'.

Good job on your second. -

Yeah. Every word after "Shhhhh..." is "It". lol.

'It keeps out silence that you shout.' - This is what I meant by that. Their lack of communication is basically shouting what they want, which is to be left alone.

Thank you for reading it and for your feedback!

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Originally Posted by farnum

Yeah. Every word after "Shhhhh..." is "It". lol.

K.
I didn't see that at first.

Originally Posted by farnum

'It keeps out silence that you shout.' - This is what I meant by that. Their lack of communication is basically shouting what they want, which is to be left alone.

Awesome, I get it now!

As I said,

Originally Posted by +Technist Barrier-

Your lyrics are creative

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