Wish I had another cigarette

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  1. Deadrise said:

    Default Wish I had another cigarette

    Wish I had another cigarette

    I am drunk and that’s no joke
    But I want just want one more smoke
    Wish I had another cigarette

    Hope the whisky it gets me
    Before I go flat broke
    Wish I had another cigarette

    Keep saying that this is it
    One more and I will quit
    Wish I had another cigarette

    My friends say it’s in my head
    These nails will kill me dead
    Wish I had another cigarette

    Please do not judge me
    I know that it’s so ugly
    Wish I had just one more damn cigarette

    Just one Marlboro red
    Then I will rest my head
    Till morning comes around
    When I will head to town
    For one more cigarette
    Then I’ll quit
     
  2. bearheart said:

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    I can really relate to this great rhymes & structure.
     
  3. Deadrise said:

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    Thank you for the feedback bear,
    Keep submitting you stuff I enjoy how you express your thoughts.
     
  4. Deadrise said:

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    Revised the words, like it much more now.

    I am drunk and that’s no joke
    I’ll be honest can’t lie
    When I drink it gets me
    I just want one more try

    My friends say it’s in my head
    These nails will kill you dead
    But when that felling hits me
    Don’t want beer food or whiskey

    Keep saying that this is it
    One more and I will quit
    No matter how hard I try
    I just can’t get by
    One more Marlboro Red
    Then I will rest my head

    Tomorrow I’m gonna quit
    Don’t need them any more
    When I drink it gets me
    I just want one more try
    I guess it just hit me
    Time to tell the booze goodbye
    Last edited by Deadrise; 02-09-2015 at 01:15 PM.