I'm new to song writing, I've written a pre-chorus and I'm wonder what you guys think of it, or if I should change anything?
Pre - Chorus
And I, hope
That you will listen
Take it from a man
who's heart is missing
And I, wish
that you won't feel like me
because now every second
isn't what it used to be
Any advice would be appreciated, I don't know what I'm doing, thanks.