Paper Hearts

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  1. bearheart said:

    Default Paper Hearts

    Paper Hearts
    Tear a page from this untold story
    Fold the corners to form your glory
    Built on false hope & ugly lies
    Holding onto nothing but faulty ties
    Misery will be sure to follow
    In a life that's completely hollow

    Paper hearts that masquerade
    This is a plea from me to you
    Give up this awful charade
    Please tell me something true
    Be something real & afraid
    Born again as someone new

    Do you hear your heart beat
    Now it's becoming bittersweet
    Feeling all of this pain
    But free from these chains
    Now lay this all to rest
    With your hand on your chest

    Paper hearts that masquerade
    This is a plea from me to you
    Give up this awful charade
    Please tell me something true
    Be something real & afraid
    Born again as someone new

    Write down this brand new story
    Leave it in a book full of glory
    Can't wait to read what's next
    The end is always the best
     
  2. pq92k said:

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    The chorus is not as strong as it could be, particularly the second line ("This is a plea from me to you"). The verses are well-constructed especially the first one. I really like the lines: "Misery will be sure to follow/In a life that's completely hollow"