Bneyamin Bahadori- Hafte Eshgh

O Nice people of this forum please translate this for me (mostly talking to Afsaneh but whoever will help, shall have me in her/his debt)

کاشکی* می*رفتیم عزیزم من و تو یه گوشه با هم
تو یه کیف به روی دوشت من یه کوله روی پشتم
برای یه هفته یه کم با تو زندگی* می*کردم
با تو یه زندگی*....

عزیزم بریزم همه زندگیم و توی کوله عشقم و با تو توی این هوا
که هوای تو کرده دلم بی* تو تنگه قشنگه برام که نگام
که نگام با نگاه تو باشه و دست تو باشه کنارم و بردارم و
همه دار و ندار دوست دارم و که میدونی اینو آره خوب بلدم
آره خوب بلدم که قدم بزنم
بزنم با تو اون همه حرفایی که ببرم تورو تا نو*ک دریایی که
جایی* که واسه رفتن تن* به تنه
واسه رفتن تن* به تنت با منه
حالا ساعت عشق عاشق شدنت

کاشکی* می*رفتیم عزیزم من و تو یه گوشه با هم ------------------ I wish you and me could go somewhere my love
تو یه کیف به روی دوشت من یه کوله روی پشتم ------------------- you with a bag on your shoulder and I with my backpack
برای یه هفته یه کم با تو زندگی* می*کردم ----------------------- I could live for a week with you
با تو یه زندگی*.... -------------------------------------- a life with you…

عزیزم بریزم همه زندگیم و توی کوله عشقم و با تو توی این هوا -------- my love I will pour my life in my love-backpack and with you in this weather
که هوای تو کرده دلم بی* تو تنگه قشنگه برام که نگام ---------------- cause my heart is missing you, my heart is so sad without you, if my eyes
که نگام با نگاه تو باشه و دست تو باشه کنارم و بردارم و ------------- if my eyes are locked with your eyes, and your hands near me, this beautiful to me
همه دار و ندار دوست دارم و که میدونی اینو آره خوب بلدم ------------ to take my everything, I love you and you know it, yeah I know how to do it
آره خوب بلدم که قدم بزنم ------------------------------------- yeah I know how to walk
بزنم با تو اون همه حرفایی که ببرم تورو تا نو*ک دریایی که ------------ to talk to you, to take you to the sea that
جایی* که واسه رفتن تن* به تنه --------------------------------- is a place for the body to go
واسه رفتن تن* به تنت با منه ------------------------------------ for our bodies to go
حالا ساعت عشق عاشق شدن ------------------------------------ now the time, is the time of falling in love

This song didn’t make sense to me, I couldn’t translate some parts since I couldn’t get them!

Yeah I think its crazy but has a nice tune to it so I love it . Also I missed a line in the end.
Thank you ever so much Afsaneh n like I said I am forever in your debt

You're welcome Zunera,
what was the last line that you missed?

Originally Posted by afsaneh

You're welcome Zunera,
what was the last line that you missed?

This one, I missed it somehow.
با منه که داره دل من با دلت می*زنه به سرم که تو رو ببرم

One more thing, can برای یه هفته یه کم با تو زندگی* می*کردم be translated as "for you one week is not enough, I want to be with you my whole life"?
thats my favorite line in the song n I really want it to mean something as beautiful as it sounds in Farsi.

Originally Posted by Zunera

This one, I missed it somehow.
با منه که داره دل من با دلت می*زنه به سرم که تو رو ببرم

One more thing, can برای یه هفته یه کم با تو زندگی* می*کردم be translated as "for you one week is not enough, I want to be with you my whole life"?
thats my favorite line in the song n I really want it to mean something as beautiful as it sounds in Farsi.

it is something like "your heart is with me so I'm deciding to take you with myself"

no, Zunera it can't be translated that way, but I assure you, your line is more beautiful than the actual meaning

Originally Posted by afsaneh

it is something like "your heart is with me so I'm deciding to take you with myself"

Thank you for that.

Originally Posted by afsaneh

no, Zunera it can't be translated that way, but I assure you, your line is more beautiful than the actual meaning

Aww well that sucks. Would have been better if it could also mean what I wanted it to. I actually broke down the sentence word by word n I know that's not how you translate something but since I'm learning ( n I'm not a methodical learner) I thought maybe I should I give it a go.
This is how I did it.
برای/for یه هفته/one week یه کم/less/not enough با تو/with you زندگی/life می کردم/I do

You said my line is better than the actual meaning!! maybe I should write his songs

Originally Posted by Zunera

برای/for یه هفته/one week یه کم/less/not enough با تو/with you زندگی/life می کردم/I do

There's not "not enough" in the farsi sentence. It's like this word by word:
برای/for یه هفته/one week یه کم/a little/ با تو/with you زندگی می کردم/I lived

Originally Posted by Zunera

You said my line is better than the actual meaning!! maybe I should write his songs

That'll be a good idea