Hey guys i've been writting/rapping for around 6 months now been making progress on lyrics and flow this is just a quick 30 mins piece i wrote, but what do you think i could improve


one move one step, always got the next one prepped my mind is a ongoing butterfly effect
see what i need plan the needs for the speed be what i need till the seed blooms to a tree
metaphors for the men on pause send em stores of my venom claws, sent with cause like santaclaus
intentions power inventions prevention towers ascension
the shadow of myself has gripped my attention
fearing a power that has no comprehension
no hold of my soul im lost in detention looking for the gold in my bowl i found an extension
through the drugs that i hold hoping for holes to close at the end
but thats another open road closing a friend
so i clutch the pen write down these thoughts trapped inside of this den
no progression until i've moved my port with suggestion
if im not writing im not living my dream,
thats why every night im, re-creating the scene
merging with the picture i've seen displayed on my screen
aint nothing gonna stop me following my path with an iron will, metal cage ready for any hill
im a tank renegade governed by a higher thrill
dedicate these lines to the seekers, of the truth higher purpose or just plain believers
theres a god out there and his name aint jesus your the only one you can trust this aint
a mother****ing thesis let it turn into love for the reflections of your pieces.