Girl the tides have turned (Who's laughin now?)

Hello community! I'm new here.. actually just wrote my first song ever last night and started polishing it up today. I extended some vowels to try and portray the way I sung it in my head when I wrote it. Constructive criticism is welcome!


Well you went out, made a mistake one night
which'll have repercussions for the rest of your life
At first I had no idea whaaaat to do
thought I'd spend the rest of my life with you
I tried givin' everything that ya asked for
While you laughed your [butt] right out my door.

girl the tides have turned, who's laughin now?
never was truly happy 'til you turned around

You came on over dropped off my key,
bragged about your exploits, you craaaazy.
I used to blame myself, what could it be?
Until your insanity was an epiphany to me.
You laughed in my face when I wanted you back
ain't ever met a woman with a heart so black...

girl the tides have turned, who's laughin now?
never was truly happy 'til you threw it all out

nooooow that you're gone, I can finally see
all the time I spent with you was haaaazy.
Now that my mind is clear, I can go move on
Find somebody ain't ever gonna treat me wrong.
That's exactly what I'm 'a gonna do..
find myself a woman that's nothin' like you.

girl the tides have turned, who's laughin now?
never was truly happy 'til you showed me how.

When it comes down to you, I got nothin' to say,
You're never gonna make anybody haaaappy.
I guess that's the price that you have to pay,
Watch me learn what it is to be haaaappy!
I said that's the price you have to pay,
Gonna find somebody that makes me haaaappy!