My Song

took my ages 2 rite this
its a ballad

I always walked past you..
never knew what 2 say
the ony thought i had...
was too hold you all day

chorus

i wanna hold you
i want to hold you til the end of time
i want to hold you
for you to be all mine

thats as far as i got
help me carry on i got writers block

The truth is that
I'm a loner guy
Whn I look at you
I could almost die (or cry, whatever you want)


lol that was on the spot thinking, not that great but hope it helps

Short, sweet, and to the point. Some of the best songs are really simple. Not to mention this one is about something that everyone can relate to, which means it can be really good. I'm a little reluctant to do as you asked and come up with some more words to the song, but hey. Why not? Here's an idea for a second verse:

Every chance faded away
To tell you my feelings.
Every step you took
Made another chance for healing.

Good start. on the right track. Keep up the verses. Do you have music in mind for it yet.

got some gd song mixing up there allways ave a bakgrond song its helps so much