Someday(Unofficial Title)

The song is not completely done. I need one more verse to end it. Anyways I'm a beginner at this so please give me constructive criticism. Crit for crit.

When a dream hits the past,
And it's not gon'a last,
Those tears, they come to fall,
When a dream hits the past.

When the world seems to fall,
And you give it your all,
You're on your hands and knees,
When the world seems to fall.

Chorus
Someday,
Someday I'll help you,
I'll save you,
I'll hold you,
In my arms.
I'll save you,
I'll save you,
From this place we call home, someday.

Disguise yourself in lust,
But pain is not a must,
If angels have wings,
Then God will come to sing.

Chorus

When the snow hits the ground,
Your love is lost and found,
By a man on his knees,
Waiting for that someday.