These Late Clouds [WIP swansong]

Thread: These Late Clouds [WIP swansong]

Tags: acoustic rock, contemporary, poem
  1. lo-fi renegade said:

    Default These Late Clouds [WIP swansong]

    all those emotions
    and commotions, holding out;
    send an echo through the drought

    V1

    C1
    away with these late clouds;
    all that promise coming down,
    the feeling hits me now…
    dreams be so profound,
    but here's where I've been bound

    V2
    gone with the butterflies
    caught in some brainstorm,
    once faraway
    and disposed to the charm,
    someday
    I'll redeem my lucky scars,
    in a cloudy haze
    beneath the stars ablaze,
    I'll blaze

    C2
    away with these late clouds;
    all that promise coming down,
    the feeling hits me now…
    dreams be so profound,
    and you’re where I'll be found

    B
    what better would we know,
    going 'round in circles
    all these dreams still being sold;
    and what more could they spin,
    reminding of the peace
    we've still yet to win

    keep on keeping on, like you always knew
    things would come to pass;
    all in all, whatever gets us through
    just might make us last;
    gonna make it last,
    gonna make it

    unfinished work © 2015-16 - L. Aquilina
    based on my instrumental solos + original poem
    Last edited by lo-fi renegade; 02-05-2016 at 08:24 AM.