Sweet Elevation

Thread: Sweet Elevation

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  1. Gerryramona said:

    Default Sweet Elevation

    Every day I fantasise you,
    Escape from my mind temptation,
    Sweet elevation,
    you send me waves of love
    Surreal creation.

    Every day I fantasise you,
    Pleasure is what I seek,
    I control it with my mind
    Sweet elevation, I am so weak.

    Can you hear my help, I am in need,
    Sweet elevation, don't mislead,
    And I reject you, Then I fantasise you,
    I hold you trapped in, all with my mind
    Just to imagine I can set you free,
    It's a blind flight in low speed.

    Now you are mine,
    in my mind you give me sweet vibe,
    Don't wake me up
    Or my heart with break like glass.

    But I can't stop this feeling
    I feed to it, keeps my heart beating,
    It keeps my hope high,
    Just to imagine, fantasise you,
    Sweet elevation,
    For hours, I'll keep you imprisoned in my head.

    Can I have a review of my poem lyrics? More here:
    http://www.poemhunter.com/ramona-gerry/
    Last edited by Gerryramona; 12-23-2016 at 01:41 AM.