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    Default The Runaway

    One does not become,
    What one might want to be,
    This world in which we come,
    Appears to mislead,

    What does it want from you?
    What do you want from me?
    I’m off the beaten path,
    I only want to..

    Runaway x4

    My name might be misused,
    Slandered and abused,
    For I am just an image,
    From everyone’s point of views,

    The bottles almost empty,
    The pills are almost gone,
    As you hear the voices crying,
    Saying you don’t belong,

    Runaway x4

    He was just so young,
    He deserved a second chance at life,

    Now we gather around the fire,
    Praying and holding hands,

    We can use all of our excuses,
    For why he might be gone,

    We punished him on this earth,
    Of which we all belong,

    Runaway x 3

    We should have never pushed you away...

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    This is written very well, do you already have a tune picked?

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    Thanks and yes I have! I’m currently working on a music project called “There might be Monsters” and I have so many other tunes written to if you wanna see them?

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    Ive been trying to understand different people's writing styles, if you dont mind I would love to see them!

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    I posted 2 new threads (Moving on and Modern Medicine) you can look at them there and I’m not exactly sure what my writing style is to be honest lol

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