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    Default Last laugh

    Wrote in like 20 mins so not sorted yet but would love to know what people think and any improvements are welcome

    Your days are the darkest
    Like a winters morn
    Seeming like theirs no end in sight
    And it's been forever since you've seen the dawn

    Feeling so breathless
    Like a whale out the sea
    People may be helping keep you alive
    But you know it's not where youre supposed to be

    There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
    Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
    Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
    They may hold you down but
    you will have the last laugh yet

    Remember the day when
    You'd never wanna leave your bed
    Your thought where all jumping around
    Like there is a war zone in you head

    Remember the evening
    Where you never felt more alone
    Where you sat feeling sorry for yourself
    Whilst staring hopelessly at your phone

    There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
    Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
    Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
    They may hold you down but
    you will have the last laugh yet

    There will be good time
    Then it all can be a mess
    Just take each day with a pinch of salt
    With a smile marked fancy dress

    It will take effort
    So If you tired then take a rest
    Don't allow them to press your buttons
    Now you are coming close to your best

    There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
    Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
    Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
    They may hold you down
    but you will have the last laugh yet

    Don't let the failing of the past effect your mind set
    Don't let the world gather you up In its void of regret
    They will fight to keep you down but il take that bet
    Because you best believe you'll have the last laugh yet

    There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
    Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
    Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
    They may hold you down but
    you will have the last laugh yet

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    I see what your going for not bad but rap a lil cocky man the templates there get comfortable with it

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