If Only You Could Understand

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  1. Ament said:

    Unhappy If Only You Could Understand

    Didnt ever look you straight in the eyes
    Afraid not scared of what it might imply
    Got questions I can't bring myself to ask
    If I didnt care I wouldnt be here

    You were always a star in someone elses sky, (briefly smiling).
    I was always thinking of what to say,( the next line)
    To think I'd never be good enough (for you)
    Well at least i was honest (with myself)

    Maybe he only kissed you because it was her you embraced goodnight.
    I'm tired of people asking me if I'm still alright
    A rose with hidden thorns
    But hell I'll hold it tight

    I'd swap my time waiting to win one more chance
    Your words delivered with little more than a glance
    To be trusted is a greater compliment than being loved
    Your smile might have lost its meaning but not its comfort.

    You were always a star in someone elses sky, (briefly smiling).
    I was always thinking of what to say,( the next line)
    To think I'd never be good enough (for you)
    Well at least i was honest (with myself)

    If the days werent so short we could think about this
    **** it all just judge me amiss
    Not telling the truth but I never lied
    You go and come but my world abides


    This one needs rewriting....any help?
     
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    Leofire305 said:

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    hmmmmm i like it - it has promise , especially the chorous just on the last part of the chorus you could just say Well at least i was honest with myself (with myself) so it would be like an echo so the word "myself" would stick . try that
    and watever lacks in the writing can be made up for in the melody - like if you listen to some songs - they dont make as much sence when we just say it , but if we say it with a melody we "get" it ..
    hope i helped
    ANd good luck finishing - im here if u need help
    CECE 4 prez.