Hey, please feel free to critique, give advice, or make fun of my lyrics, I'm only fifteen and haven't written much, so try not to kill me.
Sailboat
Verse
And her I am, trapped in a sailboat
Not your normal sailboat no nope
A sailboat built for lovers this is
But there is a steelbared cage around it
I climbed into the boat unaware
Blinded by a love ever so rare
But when the bars closed in and I was trapped
I desperately wanted out
Pre-Chorus
Im slamming on the cages, I want to bail out
Screaming inside till my lungs burst, and to the seas I shout out
Chorus
Do you hate me, I just want to swim away
To a luxury cruise, where love is real, but where I dont have to stay x2
Verse2
But despite my best efforts, the waves only grow
Look at the mess Ive got my self into now
My love is fading, but was it ever real
Did we really ever love, was any of it real
But Oh my god, I found a key under a board
Of the rusted old sail boat, where lovers were stored
I could open the bars, and I could bail out
But is the water deceiving me? All I could do was shout
Chorus
Do you hate me, I just want to swim away
To a luxury cruise, where love is real, but where I dont have to stay x2
Bridge
But if I jump will I ever find that luxury cruise
Or maybe this love that im yearning for, something I will lose
Does it really exist, Is it something I will ever find
Maybe love is just something I created in my mind
But Im struggling at the bars, should a bail or not
But all i can see is me drownging on the spot
So I decide to wait, if she loves me I will find out
But until then I will lean through the bars and aloud will shout
Chorus
Do you hate me, I just want to swim away
To a luxury cruise, where love is real, but where I dont have to stay x4