My band's lyrics

Im still working on the drum tracks for my cd, but it is nearly done. Just need to finish some mixing and mastering.

Ive got lots of lyrics and just wanted to share some of them to see whatothers think, If you like them maybe we could share some, I enjoy reading others.

Just browsing this website ive seen lotsof immature kids poking around and would like intelligent responses only.

incase you're wondering: its a rock/blues/jazz fusion band
please forgive any unorthodox rhyme sequence, its not a pop song and it was written to my music

lets take a walk on the so green grass
its a great day in winter but it wont last

lets take a look at the explanation of it all
ive been looking forward to spring but fall


hey man sing
sing me a song
come on man sing
and ill sing along

this could be
the last of eternity
a minor disease we called paradise
we loved our lies

no body knows if we will be forgiven


we loved the warmth that created bays of emptiness
we loved paradise much better than the rest
no where to go to walk on the so green grass
and we were the only ones who could stop it please
give us forgiveness

solo
end trance



here is another song:ivegot many just wanted to post a few of them

A new Phase:


Escaping swiftly into the unknown

masked face but covers blown

the haze was lifted

their eyes have shifted towards me

so close to free

the haze was lifted away


:38

how beautiful the sight of two fusing planets
how beautiful should a disaster be
a genius who is afraid to leave home
only brought out in emergency

1:11

a chorus stand of immolation as worlds collide
the few who left shamefully bear the pride

1:36

the ride, the very last race
but we are no winners
no contestants take place

1:44

they fell upon the home we left
the masked man thieved us as we slept
shiny drop of moon
we shall be there soon
dont fear for your life
we wont leave YOU behind


little phase of moon
your face we welcome soon
a new year has arrived
on your rocks we subside
so changing the tide of the moon
we shall be there soon
so changing the tide the moon

Break the circle


:55



2:19

Watch the time fall upon the floor
liek water drops that fade before you while you thirst

a curse that will not fade
no matter what effort you gave
itll always the stay the same



2:55

drawing circles in your mind
clutching onto your old friend
what good is money to the blind
it makes the circle bend


Just a line to forever mend
3:12

build the house before it falls down
you'll lose the dream you thought youve found
ride the train to where you need
choose the ground to plant your seed

3:57

such a vivid imagination
4:06
Clearly I am in a dream

Clearly i am no where to be seen



4:37

waiting gracefully under the summer rain
will this moment ever come again
a lust for just a second chance
the sun screams music while i dance

reaching the stars too far
in sight and grasp but behind bars

i scream for freedom
a beautiful moment to recreate
holes in memory morphing irate
scraps of imperfection i chip away
i'll be nothing left someday


spinning the wheel
its what i feel
randomize the lies


Solo*


7:26

shattered in a moment
searching for it dorment
she lays awake
beautiful moment
while shes laying dorment
and she becomes awake

I finally understand
it happened at my command
exactly how i planned

thats really good - i wish i could hear it too get the full effect of the song .. but other than that - it seems like u got somthing here .....

GOOD LUCK - o and wat program do u use for mixing ?

I use sony soundforge 8.0 andsony acid6.0 forthe tracking and mastering
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None of the songs are 100% complete, most of the work left is wirth thedrumming and i am still trying to decide whether my singing is strong enough for front vocals or just for backing

i can definately post them up on soundclick so you can hear them

Theyre just instrumentals as of now

thanks for the response and compliments