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    Default Your Evil Brown Eyes

    Does anyone know if this name has been used before? It sounds un original to me. Anyways, as usualy, critique/criticize my lyrics please. And I will love you forever, here is another exerpt straight from my head

    Your Evil Brown Eyes

    Theres hatred breeding in me
    It has infected me like a weed
    Its spreading through me rapidily
    I despreately yearn to be freed

    I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth, have captured me

    And I Hate you!
    But I love You!
    Just stop all the lies
    That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2

    Your F****ing with my mind
    You have on that ever fake disguise
    I can see it, in your brown eyes
    Whenever you talk to me, they avoid mine

    But I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth have trapped me

    And I Hate you!
    But I love You!
    Just stop the lies
    That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2

    Just tell me the truth
    Im am so confused
    All I want is you
    or is that even true
    to look me in the eyes
    and then to tell me that you love me
    to take off that disguise
    and placed your hand in mine

    as if we still loved each other
    or at least we could pretend

    But...

    I Hate you
    But I love you
    Just stop the lies
    The pretty mask doesn't do **** for a disguise x2


    I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth made me fall in love with you.





    Ps: I read the forum rules, and it wasn't direct as to weather we could use asterisks but I'm taking a risk, because I wanted that statement in the song to be powerful and forceful and rude, I had no other way to do it.

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    wow i love it!!! hehehe, but im serious!!!
    ~Lissa~

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    ive heard the i hate u i love u part before in songs but other than that it's realy good
    From Yesterday its comming, from yestrerday the fear, from yesterday it calls to him, but he doesn't want to read the messege here............

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    Thanks again. And totally, thats what I've realized. It's a bit overused, I was trying to use it, to portray that I was confused with my emotions. But Im sure Ill be able to find another way to do it, I just need to find away that will sound good and stick for a verse.

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