Does anyone know if this name has been used before? It sounds un original to me. Anyways, as usualy, critique/criticize my lyrics please. And I will love you forever, here is another exerpt straight from my head
Your Evil Brown Eyes
Theres hatred breeding in me
It has infected me like a weed
Its spreading through me rapidily
I despreately yearn to be freed
I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth, have captured me
And I Hate you!
But I love You!
Just stop all the lies
That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2
Your F****ing with my mind
You have on that ever fake disguise
I can see it, in your brown eyes
Whenever you talk to me, they avoid mine
But I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth have trapped me
And I Hate you!
But I love You!
Just stop the lies
That pretty mask doesnt do **** for a disguise x2
Just tell me the truth
Im am so confused
All I want is you
or is that even true
to look me in the eyes
and then to tell me that you love me
to take off that disguise
and placed your hand in mine
as if we still loved each other
or at least we could pretend
But...
I Hate you
But I love you
Just stop the lies
The pretty mask doesn't do **** for a disguise x2
I can't help it, those brown eyes of the earth made me fall in love with you.
Ps: I read the forum rules, and it wasn't direct as to weather we could use asterisks but I'm taking a risk, because I wanted that statement in the song to be powerful and forceful and rude, I had no other way to do it.