My Own Version Of the song " If i was your man " - By Joe

Not all of it is my own lyrics though , and not most of it either. This is my first song remake of a song. So it may not sound too good like i think it does. It go's on almost the same style of it. It also talks allot about my personal life.
First look threw the lyrics before you try to sing them to the song ( if you wanted to. ) And look at the part with the { } s around them. Then if you wanted to , sing threw it with the song or an instrumental would be better if you had one. Well here you go. But one more thing , the song can get kinda violent to some people , but not very violent. It has only one bad curse word in it. Now you should start.
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mmmmmmh, hell yeah hell yeah
ooooooo noooo
lalalalala
lalalalalalala
ooooooo
lalalalala
if you were man , yeah

I've been threw allot of things
with this ruthless guy I found
i swear to you i've changed
baby i ain't bugging out
this other guy really put me threw hell
but you deserve to be with someone else
but i gotta be straight up
boy i just gotta kiss and make up ( with you )
we fell in love allot of ways
how do you throw that away
the other guy was the heart of me
untill he f**king let it break
If you saw his face you'd really hurt him
And possibly , maybe kill him
but no more lies
Ima keep it real this time..
( Chorus )
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Help me understand
what would of happen..
if i never were to cheating
would i give up the world for you ,
boy i'd do the best i can,
loved you forever is what i'd done
if i never cheated
if you were my man
you should've been my man.
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Got rid of everything
that was hurting me and you...
my heart feels so empty
from what i've done to you
I wish that other guy would really know
but i also wish he would let it go
boy no more lies , Im for real this time
( Chorus )
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Help me understand
what would of happen..
if i never were to cheating
would i give up the world for you ,
boy i'd do the best i can,
loved you forever is what i'd done
if i never cheated
if you were my man
you should've been my man.
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Boy I know that you're worth fighting for
But i know that i should just let it go
But you are still on my mind
And that other guy really made my life cry
He let my Self-Esteem lower down
All the way down to the underground
But i know that you still love me
give me another chance baby.
(oooooo,oooo)
{ This part is over the singing part }
Should've been my man.....
Should've been my man.....
Should've been my man.....
I will never cheat again..
I will never cheat again..
( Chorus )
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Help me understand
what would of happen..
if i never were to cheating
would i give up the world for you ,
boy i'd do the best i can,
loved you forever is what id done
if i never cheated
if you were my man
you should've been my man.
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( Chorus )
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Help me understand
what would of happen..
if i never were to cheating
would i give up the world for you ,
boy i'd do the best i can,
loved you forever is what id done
if i never cheated
if you were my man
you should've been my man.
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well , tell me what you think , i looked threw and i didn't catch any Grammer-Like mistakes ( well of course i didn't capitalized it after each sentence ) but some things aren't susposed to be perfect ( like an easier way to say something ) but tell me if there is any mistakes.

im waiting for a response.