Nu metal

normaly i dont do nu metal but i was just feeling it.

Drowning in sorrow,
engulfed by fear,
plaged by darkness,
never with light,
Curse this pain that surrounds you at night!
*echo*
Allways at Night!
*echo*

You never fight,
never gain respect,
Its never Right!
No one aids you in your plight!
To do whats right!
To fight!
those enemys of the night!
thats right!

Is it in Vain?
To fight this pain?
for the fame of your game?

the darkness spreads this pain,
and your to blame,
for not Destroying this Plage.

Even if no-one aids you in your plight,
still, you should fight! (D*** Right!)
to kill this creachure of the night!

Your Plight,
Ends in Shame,
And Your to Blame for this Nightmare of Pain!

Its definately slipknot style nu lol. Um, critisicm? dont Rhyme words so often, its not metal like. you gotta use words that dont rhyme to make a nu rythm itself. Its a complex idea. And plight could be reworded, it doesnt work to well. I like the rest though, and creature not creachure. LOL. good job though dude.

7/10

yea, spelling isnt my strong point lol

i see, meh. Im not one to complain.