Fate

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  1. Lovenotez07 said:

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    Every time I close my eyes
    All the memories I see
    Times of laughter,love and sharing
    Never a moment without caring
    How I long to hold you in my arms
    And tell you it's ok
    How I wish that I could tell you
    Just exactly how I feel
    How much I do love you
    And how much I really care
    Some may say it's too late
    To express my love for you
    But I believe in miracles
    Especially one called fate
    I know somethimes when you love someone
    You've got to let them go
    So if it's really meant to be
    Then my heart will call you home.

    Geneva R. Patterson
    Copyright ©2007 Geneva Patterson
     
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    Hi there! Those lyrics are really good there's nothing there that I would change with those! They're really meaningful lyrics, very powerful! What music are you planning on putting that to, it's just would that lengthen the song or is it going to be a short song, just out of curiosity?
    Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?
     
  3. Lovenotez07 said:

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    Thank you so much, I never really thought about it I know I want to set these words to music just I want to try playing with the words to set it for more of a song lyric pattern. I'm sure I will--I have serveral others that started out this way and turned out fairly good.
     
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    You're welcome! I would agree these have turned out very well! They're very clear on the message that they are giving out, even if people have no experience in the theme of your song they will still be able to relate to them, as I mentioned before they are very powerful, you understand fully the feelings being portrayed, and it all flow very well so no it would appear you have found a method that works for you!
    Do you serve a purpose or purposely serve?