always && forever

these are my first lyrics... they're arn't really good but i just wanna improve...

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verse #1
i`ll keep my promise
when i say "i`ll love you `till the end"
ii know its my destiny
to find someone like you
now that i`ve got you
i`ll never let you go
&& ii
always want you by my side

chorus:
so why can`t you see it baby?
see that you`re the only one in me
you`re my angel without wings
you`re my everything
i`ll do anything to make you see
that it`s always and forever

verse #2
can you be by my side
holding my hand
and guiding me through
ii wanna be with you
as we look at the skies every night
please hold me tight
for the rest of my life

verse #3
i`ll never say goodbye to those memories
we`ve shared
like the time we fist meet each other
and when you called in the middle of the day
just to say "oh ii love you"
so please listen when ii say that it`ll be
always and forever

Hi there! Those are very good for your first lyrics! However there are a few lines that I would suggest changing,
"when i say "i`ll love you `till the end"
ii know its my destiny
to find someone like you
now that i`ve got you"
These I would suggest changing to something like, When I say 'that I will always love you until the end, I know it's my destiny, To be with someone like you, And now that I've found you... and then just carry on, this is of course only my suggestion, I just feel that this will help it to flow a bit better, I'd also change the second line of your chorus, to something like See that you're the only one for me... but otherwise I think that your lyrics are fine! For a first attempt they're really good! So keep on writing it'll be great! Hope this has helped! Very well done!