Ok this is my 1st post....I need some feedback or help on how to make it better. Thanks
RED WATER
(intro)
Your losing your grip,
lifes slipping away,
you dont think things
are gonna be ok.
(verse)
Just put on your mask,
and keep on smiling,
you cant let them know
that your hurting.
(chorus)
Red water flowing down the drain,
taking your anger taking your pain,
Red water flowing down the drain.
(verse)
Well tell all your friends,
you apoligise,
when you are writing
all your goodbyes.
(chorus)
Red water flowing down the drain,
taking your anger taking your pain,
Red water flowing down the drain.
(outro)
Your losing your grip,
lifes slipping away,
the darkness comes
and your ok.