Death Be Thy Name by TGS

Hello people, I'm in a band called Twisted Gone Straight and I'm the lead singer and I have a ton of songs I've wrote so here we go...

TGS presents...
Death Be Thy Name

You come to me crying your eyes out wanting me back,
Now I say...are you finished?
Don't get too tired on the way back home,
Cuz I don't need your gratitude,
Cus for me, It's all about the attitude.
Now for you it's all gonna go down,
Pretty soon,
Bout time this afternoon,
You actually gave it some thought,
As to who you think you done bought,
But im not for sale,
Atleast not in this little hell,
Of a world you call home!
But don't be complaining when you go home alone!(x2)
Well baby you act like you didn't care,
Till I showed you that I wasn't really there,
When you needed me,
Cuz if it were me in there,
You wouldn't give it a care,
You'd just allow me to see me bleed,
But now life sucks cus I've got you begging on your knees!
Who's bad now?!
Well now here is the ending...it turned out to be me somehow!
And Death Be Thy Name for you!
After today im through!
With you!
O it's true!
Death Be Thy Name(x7)
...this one's for you!

well... if you ever get signed tell me, sounds good, all i see that could be different would be.. i think it could be a little longer, but thats just me
i give it.... on a scale to 10, about a 7.
and im serious, if you get signed, tell me.
i'd like to see the tabs too