Ocean Floor

In the darkest of moments,
The soul shows true.
But with shoes of cement,
There's nothin to do,
But hold your breath,
And pray to God.
Cuz there's nothin left,
To this evil plot.

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

With a single shove,
You sink your way down,
The water rises above,
And you begin to drown.
Can't hold it in forever,
Your lungs are gonna pop.
Can't keep it together,
So it's time to stop.

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

Let your air out,
Let it float to the top.
Don't scream don't shout,
Just let yourself drop.
To the ocean floor,
Where the fish swim free.
Start walkin' to the shore,
On the count of three.

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

1!
This isn't done!
2!
It's all up to you!
3!
Get your legs free!
Now run for the shore,
Before I get to 4!

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

Moving inch by inch,
Will get you nowhere fast.
So move it *****,
Or you're not gonna last.
The water in your chest,
Will give you weight.
But give it your best,
And keep walkin' straight.

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

You're almost there,
Just keep on goin'.
There's the pier,
Now the water's flowin'.
Let it push you ahead,
Till you reach dry land.
All the tears you've shed,
Run against the sand.

You think you're not gonna make it,
But you can and you will.
You mustn't submit,
You mustn't stand still.
Cuz if you don't give a ****,
Then you're gonna get killed.

Your feet break free,
From thier concrete hell.
Just leave the debris,
Right where it fell.
Now exhale the water,
From deep down within.
And never forget the slaughter,
That could've been.

Any advice/ criticism is welcome and appreciated.

this one's cool too i like the second paragraph lol and i'd give it a 7 out of ten

Very cool song, I liked it a lot.

Out of interest would this have the same style as Drowning Pool - Let the bodies hit the floor?

That was awsome. Seriously.

10 out of 10. For sure.

I have to say...This is awesome.

Since a few have did the out of 10 thing.I would give a 8 1/2..