Bleeding Life Away

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  1. wowpoker said:

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    It starts as a ripple
    life begins to fade
    the effect triples
    cursing the choices you made

    bleeding life away
    terror makes the world sway
    pouring all the color out
    the world can’t hear your shout

    running water going down
    the once great mind starts to drown
    falling down nowhere to be found
    falling down not making a sound

    bleeding life away
    terror makes the world sway
    pouring all the color out
    the world can’t hear your shout

    everything is nothing
    the world caught you bluffing
    you thought you had it understood
    the chaos has you for good

    bleeding life away
    terror makes the world sway
    pouring all the color out
    the world can’t hear your shout

    searching for more than just a dream
    things are more than they seem
    truth forgotten justice destroyed
    army after army now deployed
    blood falling on the dirt
    the earth itself starts to hurt

    bleeding life away
    terror makes the world sway
    pouring all the color out
    the world can’t hear your shout

    destruction explosions chaos ensue
    there isn’t much that we can do
    I can’t breathe I’m turning blue
    terror, chaos, insanity too
    death is nothing, nothing new!

    Written by,
    -Alex Johnson
    Last edited by wowpoker; 08-18-2007 at 11:47 PM. Reason: Added "all" to "pouring all the color out"
     
  2. MarcoB said:

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    Oh my god ! ! ! Beautifull written ! ! ! I have read two song of you, i am already your fan! What can i say, it touches me your lyrics, the beste feeling that there is in the world, if you ask me! Greets Marco
     
  3. wowpoker said:

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    Thanks alot man, thanks for reading/posting on all my lyrics.
     
  4. MarcoB said:

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    You are welcome! It's the truth, great job!
     
  5. noaht12321 said:

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    Cool Tell me though R they hardcore Or A Soft Band Or What
     
  6. MarcoB said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by noaht12321 View Post
    Cool Tell me though R they hardcore Or A Soft Band Or What
    Hey noaht,

    There isn't a band which plays this song . wowpoker wrote these lyrics himself . Which he did wonderful!
     
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    Spring said:

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    Well done wowpoker!
     
  8. noaht12321 said:

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    Ok well umm.. can I use them because they are really cool and my band is only up to five songs.
     
  9. petrochik said:

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    Well I gotta be honest with you. Even though the song has a good rhyme and everything there seems to be something wrong with your story. You jump from one subject to another and it doesn't add up.

    I can’t breathe I’m turning blue

    It is clear over here that you used the blue just because it rhymes. why would you turn blue? Why cant you breathe?

    This is just my opinion don't get offended. My opinion is that your song has nothing behind it.
     
  10. wowpoker said:

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    When your deprived of oxygen(when you can't breathe) for long enough your face starts to turn a little blue. The song is about terror, chaos, destruction, war, and death. I wasn't literally saying that I couldn't breathe in the song. It's meant to be taken that all the chaos, insanity, destruction, and death in life was too much to the point that it was "suffocating" me.

    Most lyrics go misunderstood. I know I probably don't understand the meaning behind a lot of lyrics whether i think i do or not. To me this song makes perfect sense, but that's probably because i wrote it.

    However if it doesn't make sense to you then i am sorry i couldn't portray the meaning to you better.

    -Alex
     
  11. noaht12321 said:

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    I really want 2 use the lyrics! You don't have to say yes but it would be really cool if you did