My Lyrics

First off: Please Comment on anything I've done! Greatly appreciated!

I only started writing recently, and I'm in a band now so I wrote a few songs.
And here some of them are. I still have to finish them, but they work well with music I've written!
They all have a bit of significance to me too. No BS!

"What ? Remains" is being recorded by our band currently and is sounding great!.


>>In The Beginning<<

Don't mess with it, it can hurt,
It'll be gone fast, but I won't forgive even me.
But it'll all work out at the end,
Because then I'll realise what was meant!

This is what I was talking about,
you really can't see it?
A face over a person,
Dropping onto my knees.

--Chorus--

I hate the way it works out,
The world versus me,
Could someone tell me please,
How to break this crucial game.

Gettin deep down, between the grooves,
not on your clues but into what
I want to know like any feelings
You've kept chained up and been keepin from me

But did you? Really?
Do you like sayin that word,
It digs into me, I know how it could make you feel,
But you're lettin you're imagination run away with you,
But the best thing you could have is right in your path.

--Chorus--

I hate the way it works out,
The world versus me,
Could someone tell me please,
How to break this crucial game.
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>>Existed (Incomplete)<<

You're chasin a dream that never existed,
Not that special it's you who did twist it,
If you needed proof then, come over here,
I'll give you what you need, I'll help make it clear.

He could be here, but you wouldn't find the addiction,
You could be there, and not see the infliction,
We could find a share, your thought for a mine,
Where fun was the goal, and summer was the time

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>>Hate (Incomplete)<<

I'm a loving hatefilled, respectful human being
With nothing but happiness and friendship I need to give
I won't stand for your hatred and careless sense of being
I won't see you hurt others while you try to "live"

I'll take it for a sake, of cheerfulness and hope,
But not for the pain you still try to cast,
On another person, you've no reason to dismiss,
I'd rather see them happy than you're would rather forget
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>>Kindred (Incmplete)<<

Kindred spirits are rarer than a diamond cave,
but can be as gleaming and worth more than the amount to the brave,
A someone, you can relate, who sees the world like you do,
But still is open enough to show their views with you.

We all find one, found one, have one to stand with,
A spirit who won't break and will laugh and share your reclusive wit,
Won't be seen as different, just a common character, whom you can relate,
We all have our moments and these moments are more than great, a life time person a soul which to you relate.
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>>Left<<

It left in December,
A good perfect day, we had our cloest time,
We got lost while away.
The love gave me thins I have never forgotten,
The sparks, the light, he cold from the top,
All I remember most from you is what you didn't give.
Before you brightened the halls, the rest of a break,
Love always smiled, before it left with a tip.

--Chorus-

Left and gone, for all my time.
You were the present, I took the gift.

The love I never got to live,
Revealed to me,
When the love was left alone and shipped,
to brighter spaces, and higher warmths,
to a place I have wished to go,
to that one in the south.
At the time even then,
I knew we had formed.

--Chorus--

Left and gone, for all my time.
You were the present, I took the gift.

You've been gone for months,
You've beengone for an hour,
Trying to stay back,
isn't good enough as say, later.
But I still hope love will come back,
Just to say sorry,
For letting you down, not fixing you up,
Twisting your mind,
"Sorry I wasn't able to keep up"
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>>No Dreams (Incomplete)<<

Give me a run-up, a trick for a treat,
I'm good that it's all this way, I love the moment, where we meet.
So livin' like it's only your last, is it a first from what you want.
I don't care how the world feels, this is a time for life to flaunt.

Everything isn't as bad as they're made out to seem,
You're jusy unhappy because you're afraid to dream,
If you could see all like I see,
You could ruin the sign that reads "No Dreams"
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>>Running Dreams (No Dreams accompaniement) (Incomplete)<<

Takin a run up into a way into dreams,
Roamin all over, from landins to seas,
Never lookin, cos i no what i've found,
All I've ever needed is real right now.

Seein aspirations at the front of my world, you seem
Not just a another repeat another one in between...I wanna

Stay with this all my life if you see,
Stayin for a while (just count up to three)
Saving space for a head to keep close to me,
I've got to get rid of one to be me.
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>>What ? Remains<<

I am what remains of the current situation,
You're who has all the fun, keepin from the day sun
We live like people all lost in a maze hun,
Gettin tied up, locked inside all our own reins, being done

hey hey hey! *pause* hey hey hey! *pause*

This - cannot leave - without the last - being summed
Another - lost question - I can hear - in your hum
From where - to how - to when - to do
It all - just leads - to me - needing you

(sang loudly, near shouting)
A circle revolving, it caused a revolution,
Two people colliding, gave a solution,
Taken by the fusion, not knowin your names,
Give me a shot to go,I'll see what remains

-Break- 4 beats- (acoustic part)

Returning to a center, lost on a balance
Getting louder, louder, louder, louder and taking some chances,
Rolling under certain stones, uplifting at the time,
Wondering if the thoughts you have are similar to mine.
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If you want the instrumental to the "What ? Remains" demo heres a link.

http://www.bebo.com/UTopIAn----

Second song listed.