Drama

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  1. hannahbanana said:

    Default Drama plz tell me what u think

    best friends turning on each other
    pickin at your every imperfection
    sayin that your hairs to frizzy
    sayin that your way to fat
    what the heck is up with that

    emo goth prep jock
    wont this madness ever stop
    black red pink blue
    ya thats right we see right through

    stopping pain inside is hard
    leaving fear behind just started
    so how am i suppost to live
    without the one who always forgives
    Last edited by hannahbanana; 08-31-2007 at 06:57 AM.
     
  2. GlennB. said:

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    i like this. you just need to make it a bit longer. and your second paragraph..i would totally use it as a chorus/hook. i picture this as a puink rock song. as in the verses would have a nice melody...then the chorus really picks up to match the words...i like it... good job!