a DUET! Need a GIRL to lay down a VERSE! HELP!

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  1. GlennB. said:

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    ok so i dont even have a title for this yet..i am bored at work listening to music and then this song poured outta my head lol

    I want to make it a DUET, meaning girl/guy of course. the first verse and chorus i want to be done guy ONLY, second verse and second chorus girl ONLY from HER point of view (relating to the situation in the song), this is a very easy song to follow so i need a girl to help me out!!

    song..


    (verse 1-Guy)
    Baby whats on your mind?
    can i get inside your head
    and see whats goin onn (and see whats goin on)
    youve been actin so strange
    aint returnin my calls or nothin
    i dont know how much more i can take
    im goin insane!

    Now what should i do girl?
    to get you to talk to me
    send a letter, some roses, and a box of your favorite candies?
    now whhyyyy?
    do i have to go through this?
    just tell me what i did wrong
    and i promise ill try to fix it

    (chorus)
    baby...
    youre the reason why i breathe
    so jus tell me..
    how did we come down to this?
    cause i..
    always been in love with you
    never put anything above you
    i'm going..
    crazy without you here!

    well there is my verse...ladies if you want switch the chorus up to have it from your point of view..help me out though!
     
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    Luvya said:

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    I tried. I don't know if it becomes clear why she doesn't want to talk to him. Tell me what you think =)

    My conscience is killing me
    How could I ever be so bad?
    He was just thrilling me
    With all he did in bed
    Boy, believe me I love you
    More than I ever loved before
    But I wasn't true
    And I can't look you in the eyes no more
    I'm so sorry about this
    It is you that I miss day and night and night and day
    But hey
    I don't want to quit you
    I just can't talk about this s**t now
    Try to trust me

    Baby you were just so far away
    I can't tell you all the things I gotta say
    Cuz I still love you
    Even near him I thought of you
    Are you going to forgive me?
     
  3. GlennB. said:

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    i absolutely LOVED it!!

    i am going to make a NEW post with the complete song! u have helped me out SO much!!