Love (duet with LUVYA)

where do i go? where do i begin? i need u here....listen..


(verse 1-Guy)
Baby whats on your mind?
can i get inside your head
and see whats goin onn (and see whats goin on)
youve been actin so strange
aint returnin my calls or nothin
i dont know how much more i can take
im goin insane!

Now what should i do girl?
to get you to talk to me
send a letter, some roses, and a box of your favorite candies?
now whhyyyy?
do i have to go through this?
just tell me what i did wrong
and i promise ill try to fix it

(chorus)
baby...
youre the reason why i breathe
so jus tell me..
how did we come down to this?
cause i..
always been in love with you
never put anything above you
i'm going..
crazy without you here!

(verse 2-Girl)
My conscience is killing me
How could I ever be so bad?
He was always just thrilling me
With all he did in bed
Boy, believe me I love you
More than I ever loved before
But I wasn't true
And I can't look you in the eyes no more
I'm so sorry about this
It is you that I miss
day and night and night and day
heyyy babe..
I don't want to quit you
I just can't talk about this s**t now
Try to trust me

(chorus 2-Girl)
Baby..
you were just so far away
I can't tell..
you all the things I gotta say
i'm goin crazy
Cuz I still love you
Even near him I thought of you
baby...
Are you going to forgive me?

(bridge-Guy part)
Baby how can i?
make you see that...
youre the one for me
its drivin me crazy, crazy
oh baby..oh baby..

(bridge- girl part)
Baby i dont know...
how to tell you this
but i really do love you
and you're the one i miss..

(guy)- cause baby i... baby i.. ohhhhh babyy i..
need you in my life righttt nowww...
what is this all about..
you ain't callin my phone
i feel so aloooonnneee..!!

(chorus- guy and girl together)
baby... (oh darlin, baby, baby, baby)
youre the reason why i breathe (reason why i breathe)
i can tell you..
that you're the one for me (the only one for meee)
cause i'm..
glad that i came home
didnt want to see you all alone
finally.. (finally, ohhh finally)
(guy only)
i can get off my knees.
and hold u like before..
dont go nowhere baby..
cause ill always need you..
more and more..



well...there it is! the duet is FINISHED!! the girl verse and girl chorus was done by Luvya! credit needs to go out to her too! what does everyone think of it??

There's a happy ending? uhlà...(how do you say that in english...em...let's call it *astonished noise* o_O )
I like the bridge parts you put in at the end I don't like that your verse doesn't rhyme *g*
Thanks for getting me to write again, it's been a while. Maybe I should post some of my songs too...

Luvya

my verse doesnt rhyme? are u talking about the first verse? if so, yea youre right. but with the melody i had in my head it just worked

and yes you should post some of your songs, id like to see what kind of style u have in writing

Problem is that the newer ones are in German. I mean, I can translate them but that kinda ruins the magic...
My first songs were in English though. My style has changed a little since that time but I'll share it with you nevertheless if you like