Honest constructive opinions on these lyrics please

These are the lyrics to just three complete songs - at the moment they're just acoustic but in the process of being made into full band arrangements. We're hoping to have an uplifting melodic rock sound (along the lines of Puressence / Stone Roses)

Anyway that is beside the point. When you've got the melody and everything going in a song and when you've played it yourself so many hundreds of times it becomes difficult after a while to recognize how strong (or not) the lyrics alone are.

Although the song as a whole is most important I think the strength of one's lyrics is very important so I was hoping for some outside opinions from people that haven't even heard how the songs go and are judging solely on the lyrics.

Please feel free to be honest as you like.

... Where are the lyrics?