Untitled... need a title for this one..help anyone??

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  1. GlennB. said:

    Default Untitled... need a title for this one..help anyone??

    i am missing you so bad now
    i want you here with me
    my life just ain't the same without you
    and if i fall would you catch me?
    be right there behind me
    girl, what would you doo?!

    my life just aint the same
    since you got up and left me
    im sitting in the dark
    waiting for somethin to help me
    all these years have passed
    why didnt you look back?
    to see the lonely look on my face
    everytime i close my eyes
    i think about the good times we had
    the good times that we shared
    you know im still here waiting
    waiting for you to come back
    to put my life back on the right track

    i am missing you so bad now
    i want you here with me
    my life just aint the same without you
    and if i fall would you catch me?
    be right there behind me
    girl, what would you doo?!

    im sitting on this bench
    with my face in my hands
    wanting you so bad
    girl, just come back
    im dying inside without you
    you were the one who completed me
    and gave me reason
    reason to keep on breathin!!

    i am missin you so bad now
    i want you here with me
    my life just aint the same without you
    and if i fall would you catch me?
    be right there behind me
    or would u just let me fall??
    let me fall..
    would you let me fall?
    girl, what would you doo.....
     
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    Steena said:

    Smile nice lyrics

    Quote Originally Posted by GlennB. View Post
    and gave me reason
    reason to keep on breathin!!
    I like this part a lot and the whole last stanza
    thus my suggestion would be to name it "let me fall" or "would you let me fall" it doesn't yet give away the topic and sounds somewhat interesting

    what will be the style this song is going to be performed in?
    होता है जो होना है ... वक़्त ही शायद खुदा है ...
    कौन कहता है आदमी अपनी किस्मत खुद लिखता है?
     
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    Adrienne said:

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    I'd go for somethin similar to what Steena said..

    Something like 'Would you catch me if I fall'

    It's a nice song btw
    Aconteceu
    Estava escrito assim
    Eu em você, você em mim
    Eu te encontrei
    Meu grande amor..

    Da li cu ikad moci da sklopim oci a da tebe nema..?

    Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam!
    בועז, תתחתן איתי!
     
  4. chaos said:

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    no name it CATCH ME WHEN IM FALLING
     
  5. GlennB. said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steena View Post
    I like this part a lot and the whole last stanza
    thus my suggestion would be to name it "let me fall" or "would you let me fall" it doesn't yet give away the topic and sounds somewhat interesting

    what will be the style this song is going to be performed in?

    i like the suggestions you gave. and yea for some reason i like that part as well, when i was writing it stood out a lot to me.

    the style of the song would be an acoustic song, more mellow. thanks for the suggestions! i appreciate them
     
  6. GlennB. said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adrienne View Post
    I'd go for somethin similar to what Steena said..

    Something like 'Would you catch me if I fall'

    It's a nice song btw
    thank you! and i like your title as well, looks like ive got 3 to choose from!