I'll live another day

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  1. *thisishowwe'lldancewhen* said:

    Default I'll live another day

    wrote this in less than 5 minutes, tell me what you think
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    The ghosts inside haunt my every move
    they see what I do
    hear what I think
    and I can’t live with that

    I hate and I love
    I don’t know why
    but I can feel it
    and I’m in agony

    so should I just take it all away
    throw my life away
    maybe I’d be better off that way
    I’ll live another day
    when you can honestly say

    that you love and you hate
    you don’t see me eye to eye
    and that’s the only way you can see
    when you live, you save me

    I love and I hate
    I feel it, and I don’t know why
    I live with such agony
    when I could live another day
    there’s only one thing you could say
    and when you live, you save me
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    Nice I like it but it may be little less of story but that's ok. The rhyme pretty well fit but my question would be what the genre of music r u playing with (it doesn't have to be literally though)
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.