How Does It Feel?

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  1. Sinners And Saints said:

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    how does it feel to know you mean this much to me
    cause without you by my side, my breath it's gone so suddenly
    thoughts of you devour my mind, but thats okay, cause i don't even mind

    we can leave this town tonight if you want,
    all our bags are packed and we'll never have to look back
    we can talk all night on the train ride there, you can rest your head on my shoulder
    the season now its warmer, but we know it will get colder

    how do you laugh when you know you really want to cry,push out a fake smile, and keep in the denial
    we'll catch each other every time that we fall, and every time that you are with me, the world doesn't seem so small
    can you promise me that this will never end, and its alright if you need to lie,
    just when you do it can you make sure that you look me square in my eyes

    they say live for the moment,no i wanna live for you,
    i know that these feelings couldn't be any more true
    i see a twinkle of hope,a glimmer in your eyes
    if there is one thing I am sure of, it's that we'll never have to say goodbye

    i wont face this cruel world without you here and now
    you and I, we create this bliss without even knowing how
    do you mind that i may be a little apprehensive
    but please don't worry, I'd rather take our chances

    they always try to tell us whats wrong from right
    they try to brake us down, try to take away our sight
    Do you believe that people in your life are seasons?
    and what ever happens, happens for a better reason?

    how do you love the person that I am?
    even with all my flaws you still keep an open hand
    we can't turn back now, no you and I we're into deep
    i wanna see your smiling face as i slowly fall asleep

    and i know that you want this, just as much as me
    and can i tell you this one thing
    In you I'll always believe

    well I've been here and there, hell, I've been all around,
    but I've never, no I've never ever found
    someone who truly loves the person that i am
    someone who knows me inside and out

    For I'm only sad when i see tears in your eyes
    for you and only you, I'd die ten thousand times

    now be honest with me cause its the best policy
    do you feel the same way as me
    or am i living in a false fantasy

    please tell me, do you feel safe with me
    my life is secondary, next to your safety

    and I'm truly sorry for these vague questions
    they're not meant to question your true intentions

    cause when i look into your eyes
    i see only good
    you smell like how an angel really should

    and i realize that this song may sound so cliche
    but i know no other means to express the way I feel
    about you and me
     
  2. Sinners And Saints said:

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    The ending is kinda weak
     
  3. Stlawrenceriver said:

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    The ending does kill the song a bit. I personally don't like it when songs mention being a song. It just seems weird and kills the mood.
    Perhaps you could take the second last stanza and change it a little for repetition. If you allow me a little bit of deviation...

    "cause when i look into your eyes
    i see only good
    you smell like how an angel really should"

    then just play with it and give it something that sounds final, but smoother. This is just one option that I find works for a cheat ending.

    "...cause when i look into your eyes
    i can only see what's right
    you are the only angel in my sight"

    Just and idea to think about if you find your ending doesn't feel right.