Imperfect (please give opinions :) )

and hellsbellslivewire dont worry i respect your opinion just to share something, i was going through some hard times while writing this song so whatever came into my head i tried to put in my song it more or less covered all of what i felt thats why its so long :P

Originally Posted by dannyboi18

so what do you think about my song drummer for vertiis?

They're decent

thanks haha

Sorry but I can't say any more than that, they're decent, not crap but not ultra superb.

hmmm.. maybe itd be easier to understand what you mean with a rating from 1-10 or if u want something more detailed 1-100? :P hahahaha

Nah, "decent"'s pretty easy to understand...

It means good but not earth shattering

ok ok i think i get it hahaha

I'm new to these forums and I thought I'd give some feedback before I posted any of my own lyrics. So heres what I think for people who like that kind of thing would probably like that, me personally Im not into beautiful, I like more dark and disturbing

Oh and I have to admit, I didnt read the whole thing

What do you mean that kind of thing? so is it ok if to boost my confidence i say that you ddint read the whole thing because it was too beautiful and you dont like beautiful? *blinks rapidly while sweetly smiling* hahaha :P

By the obviousness of his post, I'd say ConcreteBlokHead meant that he thought your song was a nice happy one and he doesn't like them.

hahahaha i know :P i was joking around by saying id just take it as though he thought my lyrics were beautiful as in good just to boost my confidence :P haha :P

He's saying he doesn't like your song as it isn't "dark and disturbing".

For "dark and disturbing" he means "from the pages of Viz magazine"

hahahaha :P i reapeat, i know thanks anyway hahaha