1st time writing song lyrics please look at

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  1. OmegaAlienLR said:

    Post 1st time writing song lyrics please look at

    Well, this is my first time writing any lyrics, let me know if its any good. (or if its terrible) And please use constructive criticism (dont just say it sucks)
    thanks



    Is it love
    or is it hate?
    Was it chance
    or was it fate?
    ’Cant make up my mind
    Sometimes I feel like I must be blind
    I must be blind

    If we'd just left each other alone,
    we'd be fine on our own.

    Some days,
    we say its forever.
    The next day,
    we say its whatever.
    And I still cant decide,
    if this feelings the turning of the tide,
    or me dying on the inside

    If we'd just left each other alone,
    we'd be fine on our own.

    Tried to get over you so many time before,
    but it just makes me miss u more.
    Why is it so hard to just forget?
    Sometimes it makes me wish we never met.

    If we'd just left each other alone
    we'd be fine on our own.
     
  2. xoxo-sing said:

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    I LOVE IT! Great job on your first song and hopefully there will be many more! The words go together so good! Just make it longer please songs are normally longer unless they are not finished.
     
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    Drummer for Vertiis said:

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    They're ok but I'd need to hear them with music