Hey guys! It's been a REALLY long time since I've posted anything, but hopefully that will be changing soon. Here's a new set of lyrics I've been working on. It's only the first verse, pre-chorus, and chorus, so any feedback and potential advice would be much appreciated.
Verse 1:
There are things inside
That won't break free
As if to torture my soul
And drive me to insanity.
These f***ing thoughts
Are breaking me down
To a shell of my former self.
Leave me alone.
Pre-chorus:
I have
A wish that lays dying.
I want
A dream that's no more.
I need
A hope that won't kill me.
Please help me
Escape this hell.
Chorus:
In the meantime
I'll pray for pain.
It's the only thing
That's kept me alive!
My heart
Sees my time
And knows that
I won't give up!