Pray For Pain

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  1. Sewn Up's Avatar

    Sewn Up said:

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    Hey guys! It's been a REALLY long time since I've posted anything, but hopefully that will be changing soon. Here's a new set of lyrics I've been working on. It's only the first verse, pre-chorus, and chorus, so any feedback and potential advice would be much appreciated.

    Verse 1:
    There are things inside
    That won't break free
    As if to torture my soul
    And drive me to insanity.
    These f***ing thoughts
    Are breaking me down
    To a shell of my former self.
    Leave me alone.

    Pre-chorus:
    I have
    A wish that lays dying.
    I want
    A dream that's no more.
    I need
    A hope that won't kill me.
    Please help me
    Escape this hell.

    Chorus:
    In the meantime
    I'll pray for pain.
    It's the only thing
    That's kept me alive!
    My heart
    Sees my time
    And knows that
    I won't give up!
     
  2. Drummer for Vertiis's Avatar

    Drummer for Vertiis said:

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    Not too bad, very Papa Roach or Slayer depending on the speed
     
  3. xoxo-sing said:

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    Aesome LOL
     
  4. xoxo-sing said:

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    Awesome*