Right Place, At The Right Time

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  1. GlennB. said:

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    Ooooh. yeah, yeah baby.

    said im glad that im here, againnn.

    now let me into your heart, once again.

    said, i will do what i gotta do.

    i just wanna be a part of your life..

    listen..

    <verse 1>
    girl i could be the one that you fall in love with again
    but i pray, for that day, when i can kiss and caress your face
    all night long i stay strong, wishin you were next to me
    i want everything how it was, like it all used to be

    Now baby tell me, how can I? guide you back to my arms
    its been about, one year now, yea girl its been way too long
    now tell me what you want girl (tell me what you want girl)
    cause i can promise you this girl (i can promise you this girl)
    you will never look for another man (another man)
    cause im willing to give the best that i can, yeahhh

    <chorus>
    we sit here face to face
    wondering if were in the right place
    at the right time babe
    i sit here thinkin to myself girl
    cause you know i would give you the world
    just tell me...
    are we in the right place at the right time?

    <verse 2>
    you call me, all day long, im wonderin if youre feelin me
    third time around, could this really be happening?
    you must know, that i think, youre so amazing to me
    i want everything how it was, like it all used to beeee.

    now im gettin anxious, i cant focus, wonderin how youre gonna take this
    to be with you, id say thats my one and only wish
    now tell me what you expect girl (tell me what you expect girl)
    im only just a man giiirl (only just a man girl)
    ive got what youve been waiting for (waiting for)
    i can give you what you want, and so much more..baby

    <chorus>
    we sit here face to face
    wondering if were in the right place
    at the right time babe
    i sit here thinkin to myself girl
    you should know that id give you the world
    jus tell me..
    are we in the right place, at the right time?

    <bridge>
    you make it so hard to believe
    that i could trust you, oh so willingly
    baby i can be your man for all your life
    cause i think were in the right place, at the right..
    tiiimeeee..

    <chorus>
     
  2. Jean1singer said:

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    I like it. It rhymes and flows very well. U write this about your gf?
     
  3. texter-bernd said:

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    Yeah, I like it too! Easy to follow (implicit) story and a positive approach which leaves a good feeling. Great!
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    the ooh babys are a bit cheesy and I'd change the line in V1 to "...when I can see your face" to stop it being too long and /or cheesier
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