Emptiness

I know there ar far more people posting new threads then people reviewing them, so heres the last set of lyrics im posting. A lot more deep and personal then the last two.

Beautiful rose, sweet rose
Where did all your pedals go?
Where's your colour? Where's your glow?
What have they done to my precious rose?

What have they done? where have they run?
How have I lost? How have I won?
They crushed my hopes, They crushed my dreams
My rose is dead, and now it seems

That im just empty, just emptiness
I dont want any sympathy
Its all so empty, Im emotionless
I just want the world away from me

Have I lost faith, or has faith lost me?
If Im alive, why cant I see?
Is there an awnser, or just a void?
My soul is raped, and my hearts destroyed

What have they done? where have they run?
How have I lost? How have I won?
They crushed my hopes, They crushed my dreams
My rose is dead, and now it seems

That im just empty, just emptiness
I hate the world and the world hates me
and its empty, Just loneliness
Only death can set me free

Will they shed a tear, will they even care?
Will I go to hell? Or am I already there?
I cant survive, I cant live alone
I'll say goodbye to the pain, the only friend ive ever known

What have they done? where have they run?
How have I lost? How have I won?
They crushed my hopes, They crushed my dreams
My rose is dead, and now it seems

That im just empty, just emptiness
Its gone and theres nothing I can do
Im just empty, Just hopelessness
please tell my rose we'll be together soon

Really, really good...except you might want to replace "pedals" with "petals" and "just emptiness" with "so empty". Other than that, your lyrics are amazing. You have a true talent, so keep it up and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

Thanks, I really appreciate your compliments. And I agree that pedals is better then petals, I just didnt know which word to use.