Opinions on Bombay Eyes

Below is a composition written by myself called "Bombay Eyes"... IMHO's sought...


I slept
with you in a full moon
and when i finally woke up
I wept
for your written lightning struck noon

how can you just walk away
leaving me a cold blooded note
you've stolen all emotion from my face
was it you or my alleged best friend who wrote

it's over it's over it's over
goodbye goodbye goodbye
signed yours no more no more no more
Bombay eyes Bombay eyes Bombay eyes

I regret
for ever introducing both of you
those broken pieces of sharing love
I've kept
when you were seducing a fool

how can you just walk away
how can you do so wrong
mystified I checked our new account today
sure enough like you like him the money's all gone

it's over it's over it's over
goodbye goodbye goodbye
signed yours no more no more no more
Bombay eyes Bombay eyes Bombay eyes

when it all runs out you'll come crawling back
and for you I'll open the door
and we all know what your gonna ask
My reply
remember that bleeding day what you wrote

it's over it's over it's over
goodbye goodbye goodbye
signed yours no more no more no more
Bombay eyes Bombay eyes Bombay eyes

by Suki Cheema
of poemstolyrics.com

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http://www.poemstolyrics.com/dark-po...ombayeyes.html