Ill miss you

My friend wrote a few songs, so i wanted an opinion on them, heres the first

I wanted to move on
I wanted to forget
But now that you are gone
I have just one regret

Sometimes I wonder
If I made the right choice
I feel like I’ve gone under
And I can’t let out my voice

I wanted to move on
I wanted to forget
But now that you are gone
I have just one regret

It’s so hard to look back at the past
‘Cause I miss you
You know, it happened all too fast
And I miss you…now…

But I wanted to move on
I wanted to forget
And now that you are gone
I have just one regret

What we had was really something
And I never will forget
All the happiness that you’d bring
This is my one regret

I’ll miss you
I’ll miss you
I’ll miss you

its good(: i like the rhymes