I'm So Sorry

This is a composition about realizing the candlelight of love defeating the winds of regret and heartbreak. When you push and push and can push no more and still the person in front refuse to break...becuase she loves you. It's called "I'm So Sorry" and all sorts of feedback of whatever sort is much appreciated:

I always seem to gamble away
your smile for a teasing demon called pride
Even the mirror thinks I've got too much to say
I guess my re-cycled scars are deja-vu to your eyes

if the day closes to the old ending again
maybe there's a part of me just as much to blame

I don't even know why
you even bother to try
I don't even know how
you've took us to now
I don't even know you
I don't even know me
never really tried to
to set oneself free
your talk is always wiser
like coming down from higher
all I want to say is I'm so sorry

For tonight how about you stay?
my turn to wipe saltwater from your eyes
so much twisting and bending yet you refuse to break
unlike the others you've carried the light into my life

if the day closes to the new ending again
isn't there a part of you just as much to blame

I don't even know why
you even bother to try
I don't even know how
you've took us to now
I don't even know you
I don't even know me
never really tried to
to set oneself free
your talk is always wiser
like coming down from higher
all I want to say is I'm so sorry

if the day closes to the same ending again
Hey brother take another look at your share of the blame

I don't even know why
you even bother to try
I don't even know how
you've took us to now
I don't even know you
I don't even know me
never really tried to
to set oneself free
your talk is always wiser
like coming down from higher
all I want to say is I'm so sorry

Copyright © 2008 Suki Cheema of poemstolyrics.com

original path to the song is :
http://www.poemstolyrics.com/love-po...imsosorry.html

i didn't get some parts but maybe thats just me, other than that, it was good. i didnt get the "hey brother" part most but you know the storyline, but its important to make sure the reader/listener will have an idea of the storyline. i liked it though