Town *****

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  1. OmegaAlienLR said:

    Default Town *****

    Town *****


    (refrain)
    Fell in love with the fxckin town *****
    Now I can’t shake this feeling of shame anymore
    Whoa oh oh
    No no no
    Oh ohhh

    Every time I close my eyes
    I see her with those guys
    Going through them one at a time
    Sometimes 2 at a time
    Feeling sick, I think I’m gonna cry

    (refrain)x2

    How should this news make me feel
    Its so surreal
    Deep down it hurts inside
    I said I’m fine but I lied
    Think I’m gonna cry

    (refrain)x2

    At night I try to dream a good dream
    I wake in a sweat to the nightmare of her screams
    Can’t rest my head, now I wanna be dead
    What went wrong, think I’m gonna cry

    (refrain)x2


    Loved her with all my heart
    But this is all a shock to me
    Why cant I just look past it

    I cant seem to see
    A way to just look past this

    My god is it true? How can it be true? This cant be true. This cant be true.

    (refrain)

    My god is it true? How can it be true? This cant be true. This cant be true.

    (refrain)


    My god is it true? How can it be true? This cant be true. This cant be true.
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Here's some suggestions,
    instead of 'sometimes 2 at a time' it could be 'right, who's next in line'
    instead of 'I think i'm gonna cry' it could be 'I'm trying not to cry'
    'deep down it hurts inside, I said i'm fine but I lied' could change to 'I said i'm fine but I lied, my broken heart I had to hide' or 'to hide that I was broken inside'
    'At night I try to dream a good dream, I wake in a sweat to the nightmare of her screams' could be 'At night I swear I hear her screams, I wake in a sweat when she haunts my dreams'
    'can't rest my head, now i wanna be dead' could change to 'can't rest my head now my life is dead'
    hope this helps!