[I don't know if this forum is for rap lyrics or just songs, but anyways I conceived this as the intro to a rap album. I'm new to rap (as well as lyricism in general). Please give this intro some constructive criticism.]
Thrown through the window, the man flies bleeding.
He falls into the water, thinks the fish are feeding
He's a delirious mess, after all of this
Explosions and motions and now an ocean
He tries to swim, feels a pain in his shin
He can't win or swim, starts contemplating his sins
But then, through the water, he feels a fin
He grabs on and whatever it is takes him away
He thinks he's dreaming, and hey he may
Be, getting pulled through the sea
And then gradually he
Falls victim to the allure of rest
He slips out of consciousness
In eons and no time at all
He's remembering the fall
As he regains cognizance
At least in a sense
As he wakes up on a beach
He says "Lord, I beseech
You to just let me f****** die
Just don't let me lie
Here, or at least lie in my ear
OH GOD I'm gonna f****** die here!"
Now the man lies bleeding
As the sun passes beneath a cloud
And he opens his eyes, surprised
That he's still alive
A few minutes later he tries to rise to his feet
But his leg is dead, just a piece of meat
Nonetheless he stands and sees an island with trees
He scowls then smiles and his thoughts decree
That maybe this is the beginning of anything but a fantasy
I remember him walking and pausing at the treeline
I know this because those feet were mine
He didn't know it at the time but now he sees...
The man knows that that man was me...