Originally Posted by
Clockwork
I'm sorry, is that supposed to be music?!
I understand that you're only 13, but one would think that you'd have a slightly better vocabulary and/or ability to rhyme words or have them conform to some sort of rhythm.
Really, that was absolutely terrible. Three years of writing... I shudder to think of the other 39 songs...
Also, you're thirteen. Any 'relationship' you had was nothing. Meaningless. Even through high school, there's no attachment emotionally and at your age the kids are too awkward to touch and/or speak to each other.
The sad thing is, I tried to write a song like this once, but my mom got scared and said, "You're moving with your auntie and uncle to Bel-Air!" So I whistled for a cab and when it came near, the license plate said 'FRESH' and there were dice in the mirror. If anything, I could say that this cab was rare, so I yelled to the cabby, "Yo homes, to Bel-Air!" I pulled up to the house around seven or eight and I yelled to the cabby, "Yo homes, smell ya later!" I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there, to sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel-Air.