a song i wrote called horrible kiss

i got so hyped up before 7th period
because i knew that something more
than just a hug would hapen
oh we walked out he front door and
stopped at the buses
then you pulled the expected

(chorus #1)
a horrible kiss yeah(3x)
now that i said something geuess ill have to explain yeah (3x)
it started with licking your lips leaning in and landing one on my kisser Yeah(3x)
not to mention it was hot and it tasted like sweat yeah(3x)
dont want to think about it Yeah(3x)
that horrible kiss

i was watching tv and they were kissing romantically
so i thought that i could give you a second chance
before i start making a list of guys to kiss
now im on my front porch steps
when it happens again

(chorus #2)
a horrible kiss yeah(3x)
now that i said something geuess ill have to explain yeah (3x)
it started with licking your lips leaning in and landing one on my kisser Yeah(3x)
then you forgot where my head is and bumped into it yeah(3x)
dont want to think about it Yeah(3x)
that horrible kiss

now im wondering inside
if the feeling the same way that i did

that horrible kiss yeah(3x)
it changed everthing Yeah(3x)
cause i am not sure if its ok not to like kissing your BFyeah (3x)

that horribe kiss, kiss, kiss
that horrible kis yeah (2x)
kiss(10x)

that horrible kiss
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please reply back and tell me what you think! i am only 13 and have been writing songs since i was about ten, oh and judge hard you wont hurt my feelings!

Nice! Im 13 aswell and Ive been writing for a while, too.
5/5!

Try not to write exactly what's in your head, it'll start to sound less like lyrics and more like an hate letter.

haha this was just for fun though. Me and my friend wrote it. lol

this is just getting funny

that song is of the hoooooook !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think its a good start.
haha maybe dont put so many "yeah"s.