Another song I put together, this one took about 5 minutes. Please give me some criticism. I want good and bad; if you think it's bad, just tell me.
Thanks.
VERSE 1:
Promises made are debts unpaid,
I’ll pay this debt my whole life through.
I made the commitment, made the choice,
It took me in and drove me out, now I’ve no where to run.
CHORUS:
I promise to love, promise to hold.
I love you baby, I promise you that.
I told you once, I told you twice,
And baby, a promise I keep true.
VERSE 2:
Don’t make promises you can’t keep,
They’ll come back around and tear you down.
It’s hard to keep, it’s hard to live,
But this promise is true, baby I love you.
CHORUS x2