Musical Princess

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  1. bowmanstag said:

    Default Musical Princess

    Every night when I can see the moon
    And there's a gentle breeze
    The grass whistles an entrancing tune,
    Swaying majestically
    When the delicate smell of hazel
    Mysteriously fills the air
    Thats when I wait with baited breath
    For when she will appear

    My musical princess, dancing to sounds deaf by ears
    My musical princess, weaving freely in the night air
    Can she hear these silent driplets, my captivated tears
    Or the sound of my heartstrings, singing out to her?
    My musical princess...
    My musical princess...

    Not a movement missed in this private show
    As the moon starts slowly waning
    But in her meadow of maestros
    Time seems to have no meaning
    Yet as the night sounds start to quiet
    And the moon hides behind the clouds
    Darkness claims the meadow
    The smell of hazel fades out

    My musical princess, dancing to sounds deaf by ears
    My musical princess, weaving freely in the night air
    Can she hear these silent driplets, my captivated tears
    Or the sound of my heartstrings, singing out to her?
    My musical princess...
    My musical princess...

    Maybe one day it'll be a dance for two
    When her music and mine will blend in perfection
    Until then I'll be content with what I have
    Through silent retrospection

    My musical princess, dancing to sounds deaf by ears
    My musical princess, weaving freely in the night air
    Can she hear these silent driplets, my captivated tears
    Or the sound of my heartstrings, singing out to her?
    My musical princess...
    My musical princess...
     
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    smileforme_emily said:

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    you have a great writing style.
    i really like the verses.!
    but i'm not sure if i like the "musical princess" thing...
    idk it just seems a little weak..
    sorry.. thats just my opinion!
    but keep writing you clearly have talent.
     
  3. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by smileforme_emily View Post
    you have a great writing style.
    i really like the verses.!
    but i'm not sure if i like the "musical princess" thing...
    idk it just seems a little weak..
    sorry.. thats just my opinion!
    but keep writing you clearly have talent.
    I agree, other than the musical princess thing it's amazing! I can see this song in a Disney movie, Acapela the musical princess. Sorry if that's not what you were going for...