Title: Song writer

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  1. Fight4nothing said:

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    Ok so this started serious but I never am so it makes it tough. sooo have fun!

    ---Intro---
    The waves pull me in
    the ebb tears me apart
    float till i hit sand
    the grains scorch my heart

    chance away I fly
    fall and break my sky
    'cause descent is an art
    girl, when were apart
    ---Intro---

    ---Verse---
    The sea---
    washes away the sins
    forgotten or lost
    flowing forever

    The sun---
    dries bloodstaind eyes
    and warms within while
    we know whats lost

    The Stars---
    dont even exist
    ancient glyphs
    of desperation

    These words---
    are metaphors
    for somethings
    that i dont know
    ---verse---

    ---Chorus---
    I write some words about the sky
    they make no sense cept when i fly
    to figure them out it takes to long
    time to listen to a different song
    I write some words about the sea
    somehow they all relate to me
    theres no doubt, i have no clue
    just for cliché, I miss you!
    ---chorus---

    The earth---
    keeps on rollin
    whered you go
    you'll be back tomorow

    The knife---
    stabs on through
    hits the vitals
    that i dont have

    The moon---
    something or other
    its real big
    fake moon landing

    ---Chorus---
    I write some words about the earth
    they make no sense for all thier worth
    to figure them out it takes to long
    time to listen to a different song
    I write some words about a knife
    somehow I relate them to my life
    theres no doubt, i have no clue
    just for cliché, I love you!
    ---chorus---

    just for cliché...

    I love you
    Last edited by Fight4nothing; 08-03-2008 at 10:16 AM.
     
  2. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Interesting attempt at a serious song.

    Probably not my kind of song, but for the audience you aim at, i like it for them... :P